“wt due respect check da script b4 sndn it”
Tshoanelo: kontax 2 s vry intrstng,evn though der ar errors smwhr.i taught us mny thngs.cnt w8 4 chptr2.wsh u cld myk t lngr thn dan da 1st 1,it rocks
Thabo: Hey love the story.bt u shuld wach ur splng.bt all in all its a grt stry jst hve 2 mke it nt dat cmplt at sme point
Amanda: I noticed an error in spelling instead of they you guys wrote thet
Owethu: There are a few spelling errors and lack of spaces for other words.
Sphe: Despite d romance part bt eish der r wrng spelling here nd unfinishd words
Samukelisiwe: The story flows nicely bt the are little mistakes plz mind the spelling
Vuyo: Chapter 3 is gr8 but towards the end theres a spelling mistake instead of it being ‘they’ its ‘thet’